The Virus was usual Enough
It has Lock down, mask, hand sanitiser,
and even a doctor
I never went.
Me and my family did what families do.
Have Dinner, Netflix , supermarket , baking ,
news, help each other, clean.
Doing nothing important.
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ReplyDeleteHi Manraj. Thank you for leaving a comment on my blog. And It's okay about the virus. Just be safe.🏡
DeleteHi Harpreet i really liked your writing. But you did one word wrong.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lauren for leaving a comment on my Blog. I really appreciate that. And also thank you for telling me to fix my spelling. Be Safe.🏡
DeleteI liked how you listed all the things you did with your family. I did some of those same things with my bubble.
ReplyDeleteMaybe I could help you edit before you post your next piece of writing?
Thank you Mr Ward for leaving a comment I my blog.
DeleteHi Harpreet,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem because it is very life like and very true. And I always watched Netflix too. I also like how you skipped a couple of lines then your last line was doing nothing important.