Thursday, May 23, 2019

Harpreet Writing plan

Purpose:  To explain
Audience: The Principal My Teachers
Plan: In your book


Tuesday, 22 May 2019


Indoduction: In yellowstone park wolves were put back in the park after 70 years and this changes the park. The

deer were destroying  the park but the wolves made this change.

P1:  Wolves ate dear. Less deer in the park to eat the trees. So the trees grew back.


P2:  More trees grew so that  meant more birds and beavers came back to the park.


P3: The trees and plant roots helped the river bank to stay which  made the river cleaner and bigger. The dams

caused ducks, rats, fish and reptiles to come back into the park.


P4: The river changed and because bigger because  The beavers made dams in the river.


Summary: The wolves brought back the trees and other animals to the park. All the plants helped change the river and the park was better for the future.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Harpreet I liked your writig plan and next time you could do the big writing because people can see.

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